7/22/2005

IS THIS GOOD?????

HOW I MELT

This is my very first attempt at art. Is it any good? Please comment, good, constructive or otherwise

Davey

P.S. I Really like it sort of speaks to me.

4 Comments:

Blogger shiney teeth and me said...

i like the colours and repetition... it would look much cooler if it were centered evenly and less blury.

hope that helps a little--

but dont take my word for it... just an ordinary person's oppinion

11:51 PM  
Blogger Davey said...

Hey Shiney teeth, thanks for the comment. I will remember you in my will. J/k thanks for taking the time it is greatly appreciated.

Davey

3:09 AM  
Blogger Helios said...

Yeah, it's a cool idea. I agree that the blurring takes away from it a bit. I'd maybe also experiment with some different lighting techniques too. Different lighting (direction and intensity) can change the mood of your subject quite dramatically, i find.

J

2:45 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i like it - what a great idea!

4:08 PM  

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